Testimonials

I sent Dave a copy of an unpublished short story I wrote a few years ago. It was recently rejected by an editor, and I wanted to find out how I could improve it. Dave’s ideas and insights were wonderful. He gave me a lot of great ideas and resources for fleshing out the story’s characters, stepping up the action, and improving the overall flow and structure of this work. I found his analysis of the story immensely valuable.

- Molly Anderson-Childers, Creativity Portal

"Thank you, so much for your very thorough, in-depth, and thoughtful critique. You've given me so many valuable things to think about. I'm excited to start implementing them. Just your way of writing itself, in your comments and suggestions, was inspirational. And thanks also for your encouragement--that means a lot, as you know, especially to someone starting out."

- Pam

"I signed up for Dave's Basic Critique. Don't let the name fool you. He provided a three-page single-spaced critique for a 12-page story. It contained plenty of meat, and was well worth the money. If you need help whipping your story into publishable shape, give Dave a try!"

- Mark

"Thank you so much for your insightful critique of my two stories. It is such a treasure to discover people like you."

- Lester

"I was completely blown away by your critique. It meant so much to me!"

- Linda

"Thank you, thank you, thank you! A marvelous crit - very insightful and extremely helpful."

- Calie

"My critique was not discouraging at all. I appreciate the time you devoted to delve so deeply into my work. Thank you again for all your help. I learned so much about the publication process and my writing."

- Carol

"I benefited so much from your comments and suggestions. My future work will be much improved."

- Muriel

"Thanks for the fine and carefully thought-out critique."

- Thomas

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